J. Agombar’s haikus: Blackened Eyes


A dangerous place

The playground lies deathly still

No breeze for the swings

The merry go round

Long disused and off centre

Abandoned, rusting

Slides like cheese graters

The see-saw imbalanced, decayed

Grass grows high around

A solo crow sits

Atop the swings to observe

It’s territory

Unlike the raven

Its habitat is urban

It’s caw a warning

The crow is never

Solus for long, for groups will

Emerge, a murder

A place to avoid

A place of regret for prey

And that shiny trash

A shorter lifespan

Is usually the way

For this lifestyle choice

Predatory minds

With dark hoods and blackened eyes

A blade for a beak

Pack hunters only

They need to intimidate

So, keep your distance

What caused this mindset?

Kids don’t come here anymore

What a waste of wings

Sometimes they may fight

Amongst themselves to the point

Where more life is lost

We hope one day that

The playground returns to those

Without blackened eyes


J. Agombar resides near the treacherous waters of Southend-On-Sea, Essex, UK where visions of the speculative, criminal, and supernatural have taken over his mind (usually alongside a bottle of whisky). He holds a BA Hons in Humanities where the creative writing module inspired his first published work with Luna Press. He is a fan of the short story and inspired by classic authors such as Richard Matheson, Ray Bradbury, and H.P Lovecraft. His work has been printed with over thirty publishers to date including two short story collections of his own. His third collection is due for release (at some point) in 2026.

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